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Thursday, 11 August 2016
Advertisements galore!
The Galilee learners are really loving the challenge of creating an advertisement. Their persuasive language skills are really shining through. Erika has experimented with a different format for her advertisement.
Kia ora I'm navneet, I am from Owairaka District School (ODS) really like that advertisement I like to make advertisements as well. Is this made up or is it a video from You tube edited a little bit? blog u later
Hi there my name is Christine and I am a Student in Room 22 at Owairaka District School. I really like you advertisement, it's really cool. I would like to do an advertisement with you guys one day if I could. What did you use to edit this video? It would be nice if you could visit my blog sometime at http://odschristinec.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia Orana My name is Melbourne from Owairaka District School. I really liked how you have made a great video using Biteable.com. It was mostly the song that made me think about mother nature and puts me in my happy place. Have you thought about putting more words in to your video or more sentences into the video. If you would like to see my blog it is : odsmelbournea.blogspot.co.nz Blog u later.
Kia Ora, My name Hannah and I go to Owairaka District School. I really like your advertisement about 'The Everything Shoes', it was really creative. How long did it take you to make this? It looks very cool.
It would be great if you could visit my blog sometime at http://odsolivial.blogspot.co.nz/ That would be awesome.
Kia ora Hi my name is Sita and I go to Gilberthorpe School. I really like that vidio its like an add that you see on tv! I was just wondering, what did you guys use for that vidio like the editing things it is so cool! Keep up the great work guys! Bye
Kia ora I'm navneet, I am from Owairaka District School (ODS) really like that advertisement I like to make advertisements as well. Is this made up or is it a video from You tube edited a little bit?
ReplyDeleteblog u later
Navneeet
Hi there my name is Christine and I am a Student in Room 22 at Owairaka District School.
ReplyDeleteI really like you advertisement, it's really cool. I would like to do an advertisement with you guys one day if I could. What did you use to edit this video? It would be nice if you could visit my blog sometime at http://odschristinec.blogspot.co.nz/
Blog you later
Kia Orana My name is Melbourne from Owairaka District School. I really liked how you have made a great video using Biteable.com. It was mostly the song that made me think about mother nature and puts me in my happy place. Have you thought about putting more words in to your video or more sentences into the video. If you would like to see my blog it is : odsmelbournea.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteBlog u later.
Melbourne
Kia Ora, My name Hannah and I go to Owairaka District School. I really like your advertisement about 'The Everything Shoes', it was really creative. How long did it take you to make this? It looks very cool.
ReplyDeleteIt would be great if you could visit my blog sometime at http://odsolivial.blogspot.co.nz/ That would be awesome.
Blog you later - Hannah ODS
Hi my name is Kairos I'm from OWAIRAKA District School I really love that video Its Wonderful keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kairos I'm from OWAIRAKA District School I really love that video Its Wonderful keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteKia ora
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sita and I go to Gilberthorpe School.
I really like that vidio its like an add that you see on tv!
I was just wondering, what did you guys use for that vidio like the editing things it is so cool!
Keep up the great work guys!
Bye