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Jerusalem is the Year 8 class at St Patrick's School in Greymouth, New Zealand and Miss Hines is our teacher.
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Wednesday, 22 June 2016
Year 4 Holy Spirit
The Year 4 Learners have just finished learning about the Holy Spirit. They each created a slide to show what they have learnt about the Holy Spirit.
Your work on the Holy Spirit was great. I liked the way you did it in a slideshow all the graphics and colors were great you also used great paragraphs and full stops and capital letters.
You can work on having more words in your writing. Some of your writing only has 8, 5 or 4 sentences so you might want work on that.
I love the work that you have done. You put great information and made it easy to understand. Its great how you wrote down things that some of us may not know. You have made it to easy to read with the colour and font of the words. It would be awesome to see some more pictures. What was the hardest thing about doing this?
Kia ora
ReplyDeleteI liked your slideshow on the Holy Spirit. I liked that it had cool animation in it especially the moving water and the moving flame.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more information because there was too much moving stuff and not enough information for me to understand.
Wil Karoro school.
Kia ora saint patricks
ReplyDeleteYour work on the Holy Spirit was great. I liked the way you did it in a slideshow all the graphics and colors were great you also used great paragraphs and full stops and capital letters.
You can work on having more words in your writing. Some of your writing only has 8, 5 or 4 sentences so you might want work on that.
By Ryan - Karoro School
ReplyDeleteHello Nadia
I love the work that you have done. You put great information and made it easy to understand. Its great how you wrote down things that some of us may not know. You have made it to easy to read with the colour and font of the words. It would be awesome to see some more pictures. What was the hardest thing about doing this?
Wonderful Work Nadia you should be very proud