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Jerusalem is the Year 8 class at St Patrick's School in Greymouth, New Zealand and Miss Hines is our teacher.
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Monday 2 July 2018
Make a change...
Ari decide to make a song as part of his passion project. His song is titled: Change. Ariston's brother gave him some help but Ari wrote the lyrics and the beat. Tino pai ou mahi! It sounds so professional!
Hi Ari, I was extremely impressed with your song when it was played at assembly. I shared it with some children at another school I teach at - they were impressed too! Well done and keep up the fantastic work! Mrs S
Hi Ari, my names Malia and I’m a year 8 student at Kawakawa Primary School, I think that was absolutely incredible. I think you should be VERY proud of yourself, you have quite a good talent, if you had any ideas about doing more projects like this then you should make a music video and post it on youtube, once people start noticing how great you are at this then I bet it would raise a lot of awareness to rubbish dumping, global warming and pollution. You could seriously be famous one day with songs like this, keep up the AMAZING work! Come check out my blog at http://kpsmaliad.blogspot.co.nz/
I think your message got across.That was a great way to spread your message across to people.Next time I think it would be cool if you sang and danced.I like to sing and I like to help people.Kind regards Amelia
You are really good at being truly positive. It is genuinely helpful and honestly thoughtful. Your message got across to alot of people. I think you could next time work on dancing and singing together. I like to sing too.
Wow! I am stunned with how good this is. You are a brilliant singer. Carry on with your career. Next time you can put some more words in the song. Regards Corban-James.
It's nice and catchy so as soon as I heard it,I was into it.Some of my classmates are doing parodies this term.Next time I think you should show yourself in the video and practice so you can rap faster.
Hi Ari I really like how you made your own beat and how you did it with your brother Its really good. We can make a change.
ReplyDeleteHi Ari, I was extremely impressed with your song when it was played at assembly. I shared it with some children at another school I teach at - they were impressed too! Well done and keep up the fantastic work! Mrs S
ReplyDeleteHi Ari, my names Malia and I’m a year 8 student at Kawakawa Primary School, I think that was absolutely incredible. I think you should be VERY proud of yourself, you have quite a good talent, if you had any ideas about doing more projects like this then you should make a music video and post it on youtube, once people start noticing how great you are at this then I bet it would raise a lot of awareness to rubbish dumping, global warming and pollution. You could seriously be famous one day with songs like this, keep up the AMAZING work!
ReplyDeleteCome check out my blog at
http://kpsmaliad.blogspot.co.nz/
I also really like the background music
DeleteHi Ari I really like your song that you made it is so awesome, when you get some time you could make a official music video
ReplyDeleteI think your message got across.That was a great way to spread your message across to people.Next time I think it would be cool if you sang and danced.I like to sing and I like to help people.Kind regards Amelia
ReplyDeleteYou are really good at being truly positive. It is genuinely helpful and honestly thoughtful. Your message got across to alot of people. I think you could next time work on dancing and singing together. I like to sing too.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards Hazel
Wow! I am stunned with how good this is. You are a brilliant singer. Carry on with your career. Next time you can put some more words in the song. Regards Corban-James.
ReplyDeleteIt's nice and catchy so as soon as I heard it,I was into it.Some of my classmates are doing parodies this term.Next time I think you should show yourself in the video and practice so you can rap faster.
ReplyDeleteKind regards,
Shuun