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Wednesday, 27 April 2016

Luscious lemons - using our senses for descriptive writing

Term one descriptive writing


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  3. Hi i really like the way you posted pictures with the story
    but it would be cool to put the pictures on the same page as the kids story????? My favorite was Ela story....it sounds Yum!!!!

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  4. the lemon are so good and i loved the story by jono. It needs a sour face

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  5. the lemon are so good and i loved the story by jono. It needs a sour face

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  6. Looks like you's all had fun and the lemons look really good.

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  7. Looks like you real enjoyed those lemons and I love all the story's that you guys wrote.

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  8. hi i love it soo much i think though mabye next time i will put my picture of me on my slide

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